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Leanna's Water Dance by FizziBerry Leanna's Water Dance by FizziBerry
Please view the drawing in full view, the quality is a lot better
This is the character I'm applying to a group called RoN with, but I decided to make her a background and enter it in a magic using contest (she's using her water magic) :heart:

I tried a new coloring style, it was a lot of fun to do, and a little quicker than my old one. I also did different eyes and I like them better >D.
Her antonym is a little bit off though, and I didn't notice it until I finished the flat color ;w;.
I'm glad I finally got her up though, I told the group a few months ago I was working on her, and I didn't get around to it until now.


:star: I take commissions, if you're interested check my information here: [link]

Time: Spent about one day
Textures: Water texture a random image on Bing
Referencing: Vague pose idea found on bing, Koi fish referencing
Character: *WarriorHime, Leanna EverRose
Contest Entry for =izka197 Challenge Event 8: Magic
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Critique by AlwaysxInfinity Sep 26, 2011, 2:16:15 AM
Don't hurt me for giving you a critique....I don't even know if I am going to do it right ;A:

I like this style better than your old one. I think its ascetically pleasing to look and and more vibrate that your old style. I felt like your old style had to much shading to it (if that makes sense), and took away from the impact of the picture it's self.

I love the shading the hair and and on her shorts. I like shading that used slightly different tones to give the picture more 'bang'.

I think though that you should try adding more shine to her skin and hair. I think you know what I am talking about.

I think the blush color is to bright for her skin tone, I think using a light salmon pink color would look better and more elegant on her.

I'm not sure how I feel about the eyes really. I love the coloring on them and I love eye lashes like that but I think it might be a little over done. I love it and then I don't. Like I said I'm not quite certain about how I feel regarding those. The shape definitely works for the character, I don't think I would like the big anime eyes on her.

You body anatomy has gotten so much better! I think you still need practice on feet and hands though. I feel like the hands are a little to big and her feet are a little to small.
It's a harder pose to do though so I have to give you credit for that.

I like the water but I think that it needs more of a transparent and shiny feel to it.

The background it great I love the amount of detail you put into it. The fish have ripples.

Over all this is an amazing picture and I think the best one you have drawn yet!
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Critique by ghostPostal Sep 26, 2011, 5:37:54 PM
First critique I ever make. Congrats?

Okay let's get into it.
The first thing I want to point out is the Arms/hands look a little distorted. The palm is kind of big and the wrist is a little fat(This is compared to the size of the arms). Also the legs are about the right length, but the ankles are a little big, and the feet are to small. Probably the first mistake I see here is a common one with back grounds. The background has angles from all different directions. Up to the grass is side view( I'm guessing that is what you were going for). But the pond is from top view. The fish and Lilly-pads are also top view. But the rocks in it are from side view.

I think you did a wonderful job on the eyes and the tattoo on her tummy is lovely, however you could hold on the shine a little, it steals the main focus. The colors are nice and the idea has been done before this is a wonderful piece.
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levenark Featured By Owner May 5, 2012  Student General Artist
love the beautiful colours~!and amazing job on this!:la:
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner May 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! <3
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NinjaKitten22 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Its so clean
and so colorful
Very beautiful dear:heart:
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh wow! Thank you :iconblushplz:
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NinjaKitten22 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Anytime:tighthug:~:heart:
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DeadCobra Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011
Cute
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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Cquora Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
This is amazing work~ <3
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much :heart:
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AlwaysxInfinity Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*loves*
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*loves back*
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Jakeykitty29 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
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hdsOMG
I NEED TO GET MOR EMONEY
I NEED TO COMMISSION YOU :iconfuuuplz:


its so beautiful hime :iconiloveyouplz:
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
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:iconiloveyouplz:

thank you!
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Jakeykitty29 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
NO PROBLEM 8D !
>w<
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zealotttt Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
her design
and the background
and your coloring
so amazingggff <3
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
FFFF

Your comment :iconfuuuplz: made me super happy!

I love you! :heart:
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zealotttt Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL. YAY iM GLAD.
I LOVE YOU TO WAIFU.
*sends to kitchen*
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
WIFEY :heart:

sends to torture dungeon
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zealotttt Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAH. the abuse ;A; ~~~
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Starlipop Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011
So pretty ; w ; <333
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FizziBerry Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks <33
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